Shadow Sandcastle
2011
How can I improve it? English describing beach.?
For me, this first part of my English sounds terrible. please provide useful advice: the sun through the sky bled orange and yellow crosses the horizon like an egg yolk split. cast a purple sky evil glow in the rushing waters of its passage through the endless sand marking the battlefield between land and sea tides, determined in advance, foam white rose upward pulling the sand castle long forgotten, taking all the signs of the effort of the shadow children invaded the land.
You've come to the right place, the Internet is crawling with Nazis grammar. Use a colon or comma instead of a hyphen, dashes are used as brackets, such as brackets, not to introduce a list. There should be an apostrophe in "children". other than technical issues minor, the description of her! I like the use of imaging battlefield between the sea and sand, creating a beautiful image of the fight against land Ocean, waves breaking back and forth ...
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